The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Essay topics:

The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart describes the total number of population in Japan from 1950 to 2055, and the table depicts the total ageing population, also the ratio over total population for past, present and future.

Overall, the earlier Japanese population was growing gradually and in future, it will decline massively. There was an increase in the population of people whose age is over 65 and predicts to climb up till the end of the period.

According to the charts, in 1950 japan population was 84.1 million, where the over-aged people covers 4.9 percentage of total and 4.1 million in the count. There was a constant inclination in number till 2005 and it was increased by almost 40 million, it was the maximum population within the period. Also, the ageing population was 5 times more than earlier,which was a fifth of the total. Afterwards the slight decline in the population for a decade by 2 million.

In future, Japan will reduce population rapidly till 2055, at the end of the period it will have approximately 5 million more population than the people in 1950. The number of people over 65 jump up by 14 percentage in 2035 and impose more than a third of the total population, which will be the significant population of aged people. Also, after 2 decades the total aged population declined by a million but the population covers 41% of the total.

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Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: in the future
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Suggestion: In the future
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, third

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 3.97073170732 403% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1120.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 233.0 196.424390244 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80686695279 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68923764585 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.459227467811 0.547539520022 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 347.4 283.868780488 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9281735265 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4 5.23603664747 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0985907571761 0.215688989381 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0511874522977 0.103423049105 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0278345625856 0.0843802449381 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0739096030256 0.15604864568 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0243852919189 0.0819641961636 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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