Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home, leisure and work activities. To what extent do the benefits of information technology outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.
Information technology is dynamic in nature which has great influenced in our subsistence. Despite the discomfort of automation, there are numerous advantages.
The massive advancement of information technology provides quick communication facilities across the entire world. Any alteration of physical and natural state of earth can be easily recognized. The modern era is age of information. People can acquire the knowledge from home because of the automation. The new innovations are responsible for the better life of human. The efficiency of human to construct any kind of infrastructures due to advanced machinery equipment. The data resources are very essential to operate such tools.
Nowadays, the nations which are advanced in information technology can be known as developed country where the people work less and machine work more. The life of people on that well-established country is very sophisticated than people of undeveloped country. The quality of life is far better which has accessibility to the technology. Computers increased our workability on solving the various kinds of logical problems. The facilities of email, internet is part of information technology achievement which have direct or indirect positive effect on our life.
The sources of entertainment also broadened because of improvement of technology. People watch television for different purposes when they have leisure time. Some people use Facebook to refresh their mind; however, certain people are addicted on that too. Nevertheless, human behavior is depending on how we use technology.
In a conclusion, information technology has modified the livelihood of human in a better way which is ongoing process. However, benefits of information technology are more than its little flaws.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... that too. Nevertheless, human behavior is depending on how we use technology. In a con...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, nevertheless, so, well, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1531.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.734082397 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24827727426 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588014981273 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.7863771347 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.55 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.35 20.7667163134 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 7.06120827912 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202794048185 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553530467137 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640279033241 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120851052038 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560893685556 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 32.9 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.36 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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