The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relavant. Write at least 150 words
we are writing BRD for surrogate program with name "card for card". Condition of this program is customer who card'own of the other banks. these banks must lie on product list.
However, with Current pcb system, we have only 8 of the 18 banks passed policy rules.
Therefore, to lauch the program process through auto approval system, my team propose as below:
shorterm: filter the banks passed policy rule, after that, implement compare to The bank of pcb list. these banks exsited in pcb list, CSR will not apply CIC. other cases will apply CIC.
Long term: we will implement APIi. RLOS
i think we can apply new scoring in this weekend. However, from the Cpc site, need to assign person who will test this epic. Expected that everything will satisfy. Additional, IT will stand by and support for when risk or Bu would like to prevent AL or cancel application to disbument. Really trust everyone
Grammar and spelling errors:
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we are writing BRD for surrogate program w...
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...ustomer who cardown of the other banks. these banks must lie on product list. Howeve...
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...lement compare to The bank of pcb list. these banks exsited in pcb list, CSR will not...
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...ed in pcb list, CSR will not apply CIC. other cases will apply CIC. Long term: we wi...
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... Long term: we will implement APIi. RLOS i think we can apply new scoring in this...
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... term: we will implement APIi. RLOS i think we can apply new scoring in this ...
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... term: we will implement APIi. RLOS i think we can apply new scoring in this ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, really, so, therefore, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 1.00243902439 998% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 761.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87820512821 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29271313744 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.705128205128 0.547539520022 129% => OK
syllable_count: 218.7 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.6392776769 43.030603864 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.4166666667 112.824112599 56% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.0 22.9334400587 57% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.25 5.23603664747 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0117119253604 0.215688989381 5% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00325909531499 0.103423049105 3% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.00732256022877 0.0843802449381 9% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00710402301133 0.15604864568 5% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0105734387859 0.0819641961636 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.2329268293 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.14 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 11.4329268293 44% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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