you have a extra room an appartment and would you like to rent it out to your students.Write a letter to university council officer and sayDescribe your apartment and the facilities availableWhy do you want to rent out roomWhat kind of tenat would you pre

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you have a extra room an appartment and would you like to rent it out to your students.Write a letter to university council officer and say
Describe your apartment and the facilities available
Why do you want to rent out room
What kind of tenat would you prefer

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter with regards to rent out a room in my apartment which is located in centre place where anyone gets all belongings to live peaceful life. The room that I want to give on rent is not only semi-furnished but also well attired with all contemporary appliances,such as washing machine, a heater, a water purifier and many more. In addition,there is a magnificent balcony where one can enjoy a breath-taking view of garden.

Let me explain the reasons why I am searching for a tenant. Actually,I have lived with my cousin brother in this house since last 5 years. We have enjoyed our time together,however recently he has been transferred to another city by his company. So I feel lonely. Moreover,if I continue to stay alone here it will additional financial burden on me.

I would be grateful if the tenant is male student or an employee in well-reputed organisation who prefers to live individually as I am also living alone. Besides,he should be vegetarian and non-drinker.

Thanking you for your valuable time to read and please contact me if you find any person.

Yours faithfully,
James Bond

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter with regards to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, however, if, moreover, so, well, i feel, in addition, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 962.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87360400891 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.74 0.622605031667 119% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7580299312 44.8134815571 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.1666666667 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58333333333 4.34317383033 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167530990288 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0446176207773 0.0766984524023 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595410118255 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0923643432996 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0732371962157 0.0580467560999 126% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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