Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to reach successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school both views and give your opinion
"If money is your hope for independence you will never have it. The only real security that a man will have in this world is a reserve of knowledge, experience, and ability". This proverb may be the answer of teenagers' hesitancy after completing their high school, whether to continue their study into higher level or directly look for a job. While a huge number of benefits of finding a position after graduation, I would argue that it is better to go to university.
Getting a job straight after school is probably interesting for some teenagers. It can be understood knowing that many college g...
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