Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Parents are the best teachers.
Some people believe that parents are able to train their children better than teachers at school. Despite the fact that parents have a crucial role in nurturing the children, I totally disagree with this assertion since they have an emotional connection with their children that can affect their attitude. Besides, most of the parents do not have enough knowledge in different sciences.
First of all, it should be stuck in the mind that the nature of parent-child relationship is able to influence their interactions. In fact, most of the times, the unlimited love of parent prevent them to be as enough as serious and certain. This result in inadequate training.
On the other hand, school is considered as a specific place for teaching and learning. Schools provide students different learning materials which are presents by several teachers who are experts in their field. This refers to several courses that children are obligated to pass during academic years. Teachers for various sciences such as math, physics, and chemistry, have special knowledge and they know how to transfer their knowledge to their students.
The third reason that parents are not the best teachers is related to the fact that teaching needs some psychological aspects. For instance, they know how to train different type of character, how to behave in a unique situation, and how to react.
All in all, it seems that in spite of the vital role of parent in education, these are the teachers who are able to teach children effectively. Since they are experts in different field and also, they have trained to train students, it is obvious that they can be more successful than parents who have a very close and emotional relationship.
- You found a room at your company office that can be used as a relaxation room Write a letter to your manager and ask to use it for this purpose In your letter say explain why you suggest this Which room is it Why What changes will need to be done there 84
- The diagram below shows the process of recycling glass bottles 43
- Consumers are faced with increasing numbers of advertisements from competing companies.To what extent do you think consumers are influenced by advertisements? 78
- Poor nutrition and obesity is a problem in many developed countries and some people believe that a tax on fast food would reduce the problem Do you agree 40
- You recently enjoyed a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service.Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter:•give details of your visit to the restaurant•mention the reason 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 181, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
... which are presents by several teachers who are experts in their field. This refers to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, so, third, for instance, in fact, such as, first of all, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10526315789 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64440383694 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519298245614 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0172160197 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.928571429 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3571428571 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07142857143 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10878718618 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0395135213614 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043984214956 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.063121270696 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499870267927 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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