Your friend had made a plan for you to see a movie together but you cannot now not join him. You've found another friend who can go instead of you.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
• Explain why you cannot go anymore
• Say who can go instead of you
• Say why this person is a good person to go with
Dear Roya,
Hope you are doing well. I am writing to sincerely apologies. You cannot imagine how cheerful I felt when you told me that you had bought a cinema ticket for me. Regrettably, I cannot come with you due to an unexpected mission that I am supposed to go tomorrow.
It is interesting, when I was thinking about how to tell you, suddenly, Sara called me. And guess what? She accept to come with you instead of me. As she said, accidentally, she has been thinking to go to the cinema because she has heard about the new movie with her favorite actor, which is that movie you have bought its tickets for.
As you know, Sara is really into watching movies and also has a great deal of information about the cinema industry. It seems you can discuss the movie during your dinner. Besides, she is out of work recently, and as a result, does not have early bedtime. So, you can have more spare time.
Once again, please accept my profuse apologies. Hope you an enjoyable time.
Take care,
Yalda.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Roya, Hope you are doing well. I am writing to...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 109, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'She' must be used with a third-person verb: 'accepts'.
Suggestion: accepts
...ly, Sara called me. And guess what? She accept to come with you instead of me. As she ...
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...Hope you an enjoyable time. Take care, Yalda.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, really, so, well, you know, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 830.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53551912568 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35944109613 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617486338798 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.0330249188 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 55.3333333333 76.5299724578 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.2 16.8248392259 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363506948986 0.216113520407 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118542638299 0.0766984524023 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0948669847043 0.0603063233224 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215402793702 0.12726935374 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0870954194621 0.0580467560999 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 8.37731958763 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.16 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.91 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.