Your friend had made a plan for you to see a movie together but you cannot now not join him. You've found another friend who can go instead of you.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
Explain why you cannot go anymore
Say who can go instead of you
Say why this person is a good person to go with
Dear Cami,
I hope this letter finds you in great health. I was eagerly waiting for our movie night this weekend. But, unfortunately, I would not be able to accompany you.
I am completely aware of your excitement to watch this film as our favorite actor is playing the lead role. However, I have been assigned to a project in Mumbai and I have to relocate to that city for a few days. Actually, after the completion of this project, I might get promoted to a higher position, that's why I could not decline this offer.
Keeping in mind your emotions and enthusiasm for this movie, I have found a friend who is as interested as you in watching this picture. Her name is Hayley and she is residing with me in my apartment.
I am certain that you would enjoy her company because she is fun-loving just like you. Moreover, her native place is also in Bihar. I think you two would really get along. Once again, I am really sorry for backing out at the last moment. I promise I would make it up to you after returning back.
I would love to hear the story, so make sure that you remember every detail of this movie. Enjoy your weekend to the fullest.
Best regards,
Davina
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Cami, I hope this letter finds you in great he...
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Line 5, column 305, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...ight get promoted to a higher position, thats why I could not decline this offer. ...
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Line 9, column 281, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'returning'.
Suggestion: returning
...promise I would make it up to you after returning back. I would love to hear the story, so ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, moreover, really, so, thus, i think, mind you
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 32.9175257732 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 969.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44495412844 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39827551461 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619266055046 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.9732372539 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.5625 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.625 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6875 4.34317383033 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24757723269 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784028075791 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724248123683 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143283386426 0.12726935374 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582305730746 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 8.37731958763 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.88 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.