Some people think that success is best measure for intelligence, while others think that intelligence can be measured in other ways. What is your opinion?
Empirical observations show that each individual has a different level of intelligence. Whereas some people consider testing one's intelligence based on his/her achievements, others argue that it could be determined by several other factors. In this essay, I shall examine psychological as well as sociological research to strengthen my point of view in favor of the latter argument.
To begin with, it is intuitively obvious that cognitive skills are imperative to be successful. In other words, acquiring knowledge, which determines the intelligence of an individual to some extent, to achieve a favorable outcome in any field is a must. For example, all the famous scientists of history such as Albert Einstien, were successful because they possessed extraordinary skills. Thus, it can be said that all successful people are intelligent.
However, the vice-versa is not true. Success could not be the only factor to decide brainpower. Success varies from person to person depending upon the privileges and opportunities available to them. Therefore, the brilliance of mind is decided by the problem-solving ability in different circumstances, resilience, maturity, presence of mind, and so on. To exemplify, recent research by the Human Psychology Institute shows that the IQ level of common and unemployed people, who are deprived of education, is significantly higher than those who are employed in Multi-National Companies. This is because the level of understanding is comparatively more in unsuccessful people despite their lack of knowledge. Seen in this light, it is incontrovertible that intelligence does not depend only on intelligence.
To conclude, although some underprivileged people have fewer opportunities to be affluent, yet their brainpower is more than that of fortunate ones.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, then, therefore, thus, well, whereas, for example, such as, as well as, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65441176471 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.45725879973 2.80592935109 123% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628676470588 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6913222948 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.533333333 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1333333333 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.86666666667 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202577264369 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0591904186057 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667326964492 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119407389348 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052642324179 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.19 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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