You recently moved house and you used a removal company to help you move
your belongings. However, some of your things were damaged in the move.
Write a letter to the manager of the removal company. In your letter
• Give details of the move
• Describe the damage
• Say what you would like the manager to do
Dear Sir,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the terrible service provided by your company in shifting my stuff to my new place.
I have booked the removal service of your firm to move my belongings from my pervious lodgings at Bengaluru Rural to my new apartment in the suburban area of Bengaluru city. The packing and moving procedure happened on Wednesday, 5 August. However, I made the payment online while booking under the Booking Id- 2B5456K on Monday, 3 August. I have attached the credit note of my payment with this letter.
Although I have checked the customer reviews before availing this service, I was utterly disappointed when I learned that two of the valuable items were damaged during the shifting. One of them is, my new Samsung 55 inch LCD T4200 model. The screen was cracked when it was unpacked. Apart from this, an antique lamp that I purchased from Paris was broken.
Since what is done and cannot get reverted, I would request you to provide the full refund of my booking including taxes. Moreover, as mentioned in the terms and conditions of your company's website, please provide the insurance for the undergone damage.
I hope you would give your immediate attention to this matter. I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Jaskaran Kaur
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 308, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
... online while booking under the Booking Id- 2B5456K on Monday, 3 August. I have at...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, moreover, while, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1092.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 221.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94117647059 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60361534844 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656108597285 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5359639434 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7857142857 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.28571428571 4.34317383033 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211463287537 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670248749207 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541171366068 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107890585032 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549362435142 0.0580467560999 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 41.2886597938 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.