Some people prefer to live n rented homes. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.
Nowadays, the occupation, age, and personal preference of an individual are the factors that contribute to deciding his/her dwelling place. A few decades back, people were more inclined towards buying or establishing their houses and live there for the rest of their lives. However, in the modern era, the young generation prefers leased accommodation. In this essay, the benefits and drawbacks of renting a house are outlined.
To begin with, due to capricious working locations, it is more convenient to rent a place than buying a new home each time the city is changed. Besides, the initial construction cost and hassle of designing a home are reduced if you live in lodgings. Moreover, people can change their house easily, in case, they feel the surroundings or neighborhood is precarious. For example, in Bangalore, most of the employees dwell up in rented apartments and can change their place of residence without any inconvenience, if they get a new job in another city, or if they simply want a change in their surroundings
Although rental houses have a wide range of choices to select from, there is always a lack of gratification. At a certain age, almost every person wants to own a house, where they can spend the remaining life with their family, without worrying about the monthly rents. While for leased homes people need to pay remittance every month, the investment in constructing a house is one-time. For instance, a study by The Times has found that the average cost to build a house is 30% less than the amount paid for the renting units. Thus, it is incontrovertible that purchasing or building a home is cost-effective than renting one.
As such it can be concluded that, for young adults, the leased houses are more advantageous as they have a variety of options, which are suitable even if they change their job or location. On the other hand, for people at retirement age, it is appropriate if they have a self-owned house. Furthermore, in the long run, constructing and owning a house is lucrative.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1698.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92173913043 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91429636335 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55652173913 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.242852864 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.2 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149202952787 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.056974585705 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0371378502622 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.094143658692 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389101004297 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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