Nowadays, Some people consider the best way of living is renting a property, in contrast, there are some other drawbacks needed to calculate. This essay will discuss both sides of benefits and negatives of this tendency.
To begin with, there are some reasons why people prefer to rent a house. Firstly, the renting fee is more affordable to obtain accommodation for living because of the increasing price of housing. It is difficult to pay a huge amount of deposit and mortgage to purchase a house without family support. Secondly, some people work in an unstable condition of job, so they won’t stay permanent for long. For example, some people working as a case contractor, and working around the country where the job is offered , so they are moving house regularly depending on the working locations. Therefore, in financial condition and working location people tend to rent the house rather than purchase it.
On the other hand, there are several restrictions that tenants need to follow in order to protect the properties. The tenant can’t decorate or change the house without the permission from the owner. Furthermore, most house owners are not welcoming the pet because they think it can cause house damage and be noisy to the neighbor. Buying a house is beneficial for investing purposes, it is pointless to pay the renting fee for your house owner instead of paying the house mortgage. Nowadays, the government has introduced a preferential mortgage in order to help residents to have their own house. The monthly housing mortgage is affordable as a renting fee and the house price might increase after a few years if you want to sell it.
In conclusion, people choose their way of living as they rent a house. Although, it had some significant drawbacks in saving and investing purposes, but the financial and working requirement also are the main considerations.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1577.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03833865815 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74553510277 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539936102236 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.7733016388 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5625 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5625 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.375 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21413482313 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787310783384 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0816300144764 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162874323741 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0971751432458 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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