In future nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying To what extent do you agree or disagree

Essay topics:

In future nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The advancements in technology have made it easier to access the information through the internet. Due to the prevalence of online websites to provide the latest news and books without any charges, it is generally believed that printed books and newspapers will lose their importance soon. In this essay, I shall argue - contrary to general opinion - that why printed material would be purchased by a vast array of people.

To begin with, although the technology advances provide a convenient and cheap way to gather information from e-books and several news websites, unavailability of imperative resources such as computers, tablets, and the internet, to use these services have limited the benefits provided to a certain part of the public. In other words, the new ways of reading news and books are particularly acute in urban areas or developed countries. To exemplify, a recent survey by the Economic Times shows that a large number of population in many poor countries do not have access to the internet and smartphones. in such areas, the population still reads hard copies of books and printed newspapers.

Moreover, security breaches and unauthentic data on the online platforms could mislead the public and could create chaos among nations. This is because the internet is open source and anyone can upload fallacious data on the internet. Unlike newspapers and books, the copyrights and authenticity of the authors are not trustworthy. For instance, the false news spread by a human affairs website regarding the demise of the famous Bollywood celebrity created mayhem among the general public. Thus, due to the uncertainty of whether the information is valid or invalid, people would not trust these sources and hence continue using traditional ways of reading news.

Having seen the above points, it can be concluded that poverty in some countries and lack of authenticity in free information available online are the major reasons for the continuation of the popularity of printed material. Therefore, it is incontrovertible that practically printed books or newspapers would be bought by people in the future.

Votes
Average: 9.2 (2 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: many; numerous
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Suggestion: In
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Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...wood celebrity created mayhem among the general public. Thus, due to the uncertainty of whethe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, still, then, therefore, thus, for instance, such as, in other words, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1798.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30383480826 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90495224002 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572271386431 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 567.0 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.6637184377 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.428571429 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2142857143 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.78571428571 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15239517463 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052457250027 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517121509905 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0971859643454 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425144068694 0.056905535591 75% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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