An increasing number of people are buying what they need online. What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies to shopping online?
In modern times, some people buy a lot of products from the website online. This trend has several advantages and disadvantages for both personals and enterprises.
It can be said that buying something from website online has some noteworthy positive effects. The main advantage of online shopping is that people can order goods when they work at their office, while others have to spend lots of time at in-store shopping in order to choose some items. As a result, people could reduce pressure on time, and they will possibly spend more time with their family. Another advantage is that people can save money. A good example is that some online stores often give their customers a coupon or free shipping. Consequently, buyers can save a large amount of money, if they do not pay for parking fee or petrol for their car.
On the other hand, there are several negative aspects that should be taken into consideration. The most weakness of this trend is customers can receive some bad products from the unreliable store. For instance, some online store will update their products that have edited with lower price in order for competing with others. Therefore, some customers tend to choose products with lower price and shimmering images online which make them buying unused items.
In conclusion, it is worth considering that there are both positive aspects and weak points of people are more likely to buy more products from the online store.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 92, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun advantage seems to be countable; consider using: 'several advantages'.
Suggestion: several advantages
...from the website online. This trend has several advantage and disadvantage for both personals and...
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Line 13, column 69, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'aspects'?
Suggestion: aspects
...onsidering that there are both positive aspect and the weak point of people are more l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1216.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98360655738 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37474450174 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549180327869 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0266173789 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5384615385 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7692307692 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61538461538 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201102943898 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796463424838 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500735616432 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141639513024 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584765307094 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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