a formal letter to local council on the subject that your local swimming pool is to be replaced by a new sports center.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing about your new sports center. I would like to express my disappointment about this center.
Firstly, this new sports center is too far from my house and for arriving in there I have to walk for one hour from my neighbourhood. Secondly, the length of the swimming pool in the new sports center is shorter than the standard one because the length of the pool should be 25 meter but in the new sports center it is about 20 meter. Moreover, the swimming pool is thriving and every people come here to meet with their friends, but in the new sports center it is not allowed. Finally, the local swimming pool provides a range of swimming clubs and societies, but the new sports center is lack of them.
I hope you will take these points into the consideration.
Thank you for your attention to this matter.
Yours faithfully,
Azer Omarov.
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