You recently rented a car, but were not satisfied with it.
WRITE a complaint letter to the rental agency. In your letter
INTRODUCE yourself.
EXPLAIN what went wrong with the car you rented.
ASK for some form of compensation.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to lodge a complaint regarding the rented car that I obtained from your office 3 days ago.
On 23 December, I rented a Toyota Corolla car, and I was told that it was in a perfect condition. Your representative assured me that the air conditioning had just been repaired, which I needed the most since I was travelling in a long trip with my family members.
At first, it worked perfectly; however, after about 75 km it started to shut off. Actually, the weather was extremely hot which caused a great inconvenience to all of us, my children in particular. As a result, my younger son has suffered from an asthma attack and has been receiving a condensed course of medication till the moment.
Since the fault was from your side, and as per your rental policy, I am entitled to ask for a full refund; moreover, I would request a compensation discount during my next trip with your agency.
A swift response would be greatly appreciated.
Yours faithfully,
Randa Agha.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, as to, in particular, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 837.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70224719101 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82766822889 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.685393258427 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8719347584 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7777777778 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.77777777778 4.34317383033 225% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146504216213 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510724961661 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055259505496 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0770290736965 0.12726935374 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0665215896443 0.0580467560999 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.