Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society.
Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US">Some people argue that school is responsible to teach young people how to be valuable members of society. While there are some good arguments in favour of this, I think the family has much more important role to learn this.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US">On the one hand, there are some reasons why school is a proper place to train social skills to children. Unlike first impressions, the training of children is not easy and needs an academic background. As a result, the teachers who graduated from colleges or universities and so are more familiar with up-to-dated methods of teaching social values should train students. Learning social skills needs also specific educational space and facilities. For example, elementary schools of the UK must arrange a police station tour for seven-years-old children with the aim of teaching traffic rules.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US">On the other hand, I believe that parents have more responsibilities in teaching social values to their children. Firstly, nobody doubts that father or mother, who are with the closest relationship with their kid, influence more during the child’s growth compared to any others. Therefore, my personal perspective, the parent is the best teacher for kids and home is the best place to learn and practice social tasks. Secondly, since most children's free time is spent at home, parents must give an environment in which children get more involved with social tasks. Recent studies showed that children get familiar with half of the main principles of social behavior in the home through educational programs of media. </span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US">In conclusion, although parent and school alike should take responsibility to teach social behavior principles to young people, in my opinion, the family is a more proper place to learn this.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1766.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.15331010453 5.12529762239 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 5.38774213377 2.80592935109 192% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578397212544 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.6772523639 49.4020404114 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 160.545454545 106.682146367 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0909090909 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.4545454545 7.06120827912 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196114733177 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0776714315952 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498562815924 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196114733177 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.6 13.0946893788 157% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 50.2224549098 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.69 12.4159519038 151% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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