Living together is the root cause behind the human evolution. Civilized people started living together in the families. But nowadays lifestyle of the peolpe is changing with the development People, especially younsters want to leave the parents as soon as possible. Personally, I believe that living with the family is better than living alone. I feel this way for several reasons which I will expound in the following essay.
To commence with, the family always shows the right path to us. Parents help us in taking right decisions according to their experience. As a youngster, anybody can struck at a moment in the life where he/she needs guidance, that is where the family comes to help. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. At the time of selecting major in the university, I was doubtful while choosing mathematics and biology. Although, I consulted with many friends ans seniors of mine, I could not get satisfacatory reasons. At the time, my father, who is also a teacher helped me selecting the major by consulting his professor friends at the university. There might be many ocassion where an individual cannot think of more options. Therefore, living with someone experienced and pioneer is a better choice.
Secondly, family and parents are the only persons who will help you selflessly. This is because of the fabric of the society, everyone gives high priority to the family. Sometimes in and after the teenage, a person needs someone to share his/her moments and memories. Personally, I am not as open with anyone else as I am with my elder brother. We both share our experiences, memories and care for each other. Nowadays youngsters get into depression easily because of the lifestyle. At the hard time, only family is the remedy of all depression. When I was in the college, one guy of my hostel went to depression and he needed to cosult with the counceller. They suggested him to spend some time at home for freshness. His parents came to the college as soon as they got the news. Later on, after spending time with family he got out of the depression.
Finally, it is the responsibility of an individual to take care of the parents and family. At a stage, they might need someone. Spending some time with old persons is also a good thing. It is a duty of a person to look after the family and the parents.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that, yound adults should live with their families. This is because they might need thier help and advice at any point.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 106, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...arents help us in taking right decisions according to their experience. As a youn...
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Line 3, column 460, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'friends'' or 'friend's'?
Suggestion: friends'; friend's
...iology. Although, I consulted with many friends ans seniors of mine, I could not get sa...
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Line 3, column 584, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to select' or 'select'.
Suggestion: to select; select
...father, who is also a teacher helped me selecting the major by consulting his professor f...
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Line 9, column 114, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eir families. This is because they might need thier help and advice at any point....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, i feel, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2081.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 435.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78390804598 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67520037638 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526436781609 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 666.9 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.7860739782 48.9658058833 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.1290322581 100.406767564 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0322580645 20.6045352989 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.93548387097 5.45110844103 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230445144746 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547411535134 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477436153678 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127906357374 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350404533728 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 11.7677419355 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.85 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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