The most important problems in the world will be solved in our lifetime.
Today's world is facing many major problems and some of the problems is required to solve immediately. However, a plethora of people contents that many problems could be solved within our lifetime and others disagree with the statement. Not surprisingly, the number of controversies of this issue is overwhelmed. Among this controversy, I personally believe some of the problems are really difficult to solve within this limited period. I feel this way for several reasons I will expound subsequent followings.
To commence with, due to the rapid expansion of industry, technology, transportation many problems also increasing like environmental pollution. As the industry growing in many areas sound pollution, river pollution, air pollution is so rapid that it cannot be solved in a limited period. Moreover, people cutting down more and more tree which result is drought. Besides, carbon burning to release the carbon-di-oxid in the atmosphere which is also another cause of damaging the ozone layer. Moreover, the greenhouse effect also increases the earth temperature. To solve these problems we need to increase awareness toward the people and to plant more and more trees. Moreover, uneducated people do not know about the consequence and to make them aware government and educated people should come forward which required long term plan.
Furthermore, as the population increases people are moving to the urbane area from the village and cities are becoming more crowder. For overpopulation one of the major concerns is now food shortage, place of living, energy source etc. Almost all conventional energy source is finished and people now depend on the renewable energy source. Moreover, to support the huge amount of population, scientist now exploring the other planet and searching for alternative sources. Therefore, to search for energy and then bring to earth is a long process and cannot be solved only a few years.
To recapitulate, I am on the opinion that many critical problems might not be solved because to solve the problem required to prolong plan and also long observation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...world is facing many major problems and some of the problems is required to solve immediate...
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... this controversy, I personally believe some of the problems are really difficult to solve ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, however, if, moreover, really, so, then, therefore, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 43.0788530466 37% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1784.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 333.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35735735736 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90653150729 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567567567568 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.5206560869 48.9658058833 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1111111111 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210366970393 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626106867225 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0792542748933 0.0737576698707 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146349551511 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0932990692846 0.0645574589148 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 58.1214874552 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 10.9000537634 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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