These days, the most proportion of time are spent at work by adults so job satisfaction is one of the main important elements of individual well being for them. They expect their job provide a golden opportunity for them to enjoy their time during they because how to spend time during the day cause to the other activities during free times and when the do feel their job can satisfy them; they can get successful and be well.
It is clear that there are several main factors to contribute to job satisfaction that are investigated by researchers in big companies through studying workers behavior...
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Sentence: These days, the most proportion of time are spent at work by adults so job satisfaction is one of the main important elements of individual well being for them.
Description: The fragment proportion of time is not usually followed by are
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace are with is
Sentence: The other factor that can not be overlooked is feeling of belonging to their company because people need to do feel their company accept them as an important member of company and support them until retirement.
Description: The fragment company accept them is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace accept with verb, past tense
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No. of Words: 495 350 (maybe less words in real exams)
Avg. Sentence Length: 45 21.0 (sentences can be shorter)
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Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 11 15
No. of Words: 495 350
No. of Characters: 2452 1500
No. of Different Words: 195 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.717 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.954 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.812 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 168 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 131 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 80 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 59 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 45 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 19.036 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.545 0.12
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Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.778 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.279 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5