You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture.
Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter
introduce yourself
explain what is wrong with the furniture
say what action you would like the landlord to take
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Dear Mr.Peter,
This is Divya, one of your tenants, having I rented your river road apartment for 2 weeks. This is to inform you about a damaged furniture in the bedroom.
As you know, I am here to spend our summer vacation along with my family and I booked the house because it was fully furnished with en-suite bedrooms. We were tired after our city tour and wanted to have a power nap before going out for the next activity, but when we laid ourself on the mattress we fell down as one of the legs of the wooden cot was borken.
We would be here for the next couple of weeks and desparately in need of the QueenBed Room to rest our heads, though we have another bedroom in the house, it is not useful as the air conditioning is not working. So it would be more than a help if you are able to fix the cot this evening before we come from our evening activity.
Requesting you to take prompt action as soon as possible.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Peter
Dear Mr.Peter, This is Divya, one of your tenant...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 766.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.30337078652 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21955620423 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640449438202 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.6608663671 44.8134815571 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.428571429 76.5299724578 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4285714286 16.8248392259 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140303028172 0.216113520407 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689152259599 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547691029317 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0903124760529 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549064388443 0.0580467560999 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.96 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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