Dear Mr. Brown
I am a tenant in one of your apartments. I am writing this letter to bring your attention to some of the substandard furniture as part of our rental agreement. I am hoping that you would either fix them or replace them with new ones.
In relation to the specifics, i live in apartment 17B for the last four months. We were excited when we moved into this apartment, but disappointed when we found that a couple of furniture and appliances where old and torn down. The sofa set in the living room has the worst condition. Overall, some of the furniture and stuff you have provided is in a faulty condition.
I request you to look into this matter urgently. I recommend you to arrange for the repair and maintenance of the living room furniture and replace the fridge. I expect your action on this as soon as possible, as these problems are affecting our living and well-being.
Yours sincerely,
Roy Hodgson
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 94, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... this letter to bring your attention to some of the substandard furniture as part of our re...
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Line 3, column 161, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...niture as part of our rental agreement. I am hoping that you would either fix the...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... ones. In relation to the specifics, i live in apartment 17B for the last fou...
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Line 5, column 54, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o the specifics, i live in apartment 17B for the last four months. We were excite...
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Line 5, column 297, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... room has the worst condition. Overall, some of the furniture and stuff you have provided i...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... room furniture and replace the fridge. I expect your action on this as soon as p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 770.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63855421687 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6541050242 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 127.690721649 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60843373494 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 234.9 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.586941579 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.0 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0909090909 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.09090909091 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210060127266 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773503746261 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0421673135895 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129680408022 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580365550061 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.04 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.