You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.You have recently moved to a different house.Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter•explain why you have moved•describe the new house•invite your friend to come and visitWrite at l

Dear casandra,

How you are doing these days? It's been a long time since we met. I am writing this letter to inform you that we have own a huge villa and we have organised party for our close friends and relatives to cheers in our happiness.

It is true that, we used to live in rental house. Which was very tiny, it only has 2 bedrooms and single bathroom, living area were not so spacious and kitchen also was congested. Moreover, It's populated and polluted place because of that my husband got breathing difficulty and doctor suggested to move to open and neat field. However, our new shelter is enormous and fabulous with amazing view of nature around and it has got large parking space, and a beautiful garden. In addition to it, Our house is very well furnished with modern equipment in the kitchen and drawing room also is very big and we have 5 bedroom with attached bathrooms in each room.

Hence, I am inviting you to join us in our unforgettable moment of our life on this Sunday. We would be very grateful if you can come to this occasion. this is my address: 14th, chocolate street, near library, London. Hope to see you in party soon.

Lots of love,
Carol

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear casandra, How yo...
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Dear casandra, How you are doing these days? Its...
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...is letter to inform you that we have own a huge villa and we have organised party...
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...elatives to cheers in our happiness. It is true that, we used to live in rent...
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Suggestion: suggested moving
...and got breathing difficulty and doctor suggested to move to open and neat field. However, our ne...
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...ith attached bathrooms in each room. Hence, I am inviting you to join us in o...
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...teful if you can come to this occasion. this is my address: 14th, chocolate street, ...
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...don. Hope to see you in party soon. Lots of love, Carol ...
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...u in party soon. Lots of love, Carol
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...on. Lots of love, Carol
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, moreover, so, well, in addition, it is true

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 983.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57209302326 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34717417525 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.66976744186 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8241472486 44.8134815571 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.6153846154 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5384615385 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.30769230769 4.34317383033 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181637419157 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578305456421 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564183940832 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0987968185022 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.076750760839 0.0580467560999 132% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.