Crime is a major issue in today's world because in this flourishing globe there are plethora of cyber offences as well as illegal acts performed by uneducated people. Some believe that, we should work on impoverished people to reduce crime rate. Others opine that, we should strengthen our security by keeping more policemen in front of bars or any isolated place.
From my point of view, to diminish crime rate is difficult but we all have to do effort to find possible solution for these serious problem. Let us examine both views before going to any concrete decision, government provide free education for poor individuals in schools. Moreover, after completion of their schooling authorities should give them employment in any sectors for which he/she is eligible. Once they are earning then automatically misdeed will drop down.
In addition to it, government also have to improve police force to protect common men from the crime which occurs on empty streets with women. For example, few days back a girl got raped by four uneducated and poor people. What's more, cops have to write a report against crime, if victims belonging coming any complaining about any case. Hence, officers have to get more aware of offenders and if he performs any crime must hold him in a jail until the verdict comes.
In conclusion, authorities must provide education for poverty stricken at free of coast and force of cops also should rise up in the welfare of society.
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...ped by four uneducated and poor people. Whats more, cops have to write a report again...
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...rise up in the welfare of society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, then, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1244.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05691056911 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5423506506 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.691056910569 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.0772154444 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.666666667 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18908277965 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649523403778 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563516711581 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101458281122 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0683375311431 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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