We live in the age when many of us are, running after to make money, to make greater and luxurious life. As we all are aware, that in the olden days folks used to have their meals all together or at list any on time in a day but now, in the numerous countries this tradition is fading day by day as people are well educating themselves. The following essay takes look at both sides of the argument.
I strongly agree with the above statement, individuals are now wants to live a lavish life. They wants that their family should not face any kind of trouble plus trying their best to give his/her child a better living. It is true that, nowadays, technology is flourishing and economy also is thriving day by day besides . So, now human beings are in the race where they have to perform donkey work at their jobs as well as comparing themselves with others which letter on leads to stressful life. After that, pricing of everything like petrol, diesel, food etc are rising up at intervals. Consequently, middle class person has to struggle a lot for surviving.
However, this is happening due to the following a modern lifestyle, a fellow is not available for their loved once while they require him. He/she is not able to spend time with their kids, wife/husband or with their parents in this busy way of life in the competition of making profit. Moreover, this behaviour is directing away from our heritage and happiness of being together in lineage by aiding each other emotionally, physically, financially.
To sum up with, this way of living will lead us to weak bond amongst family members and if this continued then many differences will take place because of communication gap in one and all. Adding more, the relationship would be shallow with one another. In other words, this tradition of having meals together should remain in each family other than that no one has time to converse with each other accept having breakfast, lunch or dinner at the same time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
We live in the age when many of us are, ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s look at both sides of the argument. I strongly agree with the above stateme...
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Line 3, column 99, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'They' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'want'
Suggestion: want
...e now wants to live a lavish life. They wants that their family should not face any k...
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Line 3, column 321, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...nomy also is thriving day by day besides . So, now human beings are in the race wh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, however, if, look, moreover, so, then, well, while, as to, kind of, as well as, in other words, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1636.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71469740634 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52870297785 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605187319885 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2568261037 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.066666667 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1333333333 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0666666667 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208587326882 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546902791538 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589822653915 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1232472358 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0723544109743 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.