You have seen an advertisemenrt in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six years old child.
Write a letter to the parents in your letter
- Explain why you would like the job
- Give detail of why you would be a suitable to employ
- Say how you would spend your free time while your are in australia
You do not need to write any addresses
Begin your letter as follows
Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Celina. I am 23 years old and can speaki English and Spanish pretty well. At present, I am working as a freelance in designing. I already passed visa for Australian Working holiday and as my plan, I will be here next next month. I am writing with regard to apply for the job which you advertised recently in the Australian magazine.
I have been working in kindergaten school for last year as a assistant teacher in a part time job. I had experiences in looking after children during 2 years when I lived with my sister’s family. I love children. I hope I can get education degree in Australia next few years. I am very keen to have a kind of this job in my working holiday time.
As I mentioned above, I already pass Australia working holiday visa for one year. During this time, I am planning spend a haft of year to take care your child if I can pass your demands. I hope all Sunday and night time from 9 PM are my private time. However, we can discuss more about time if you want. I do hope you will be interested in my application.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully
Celina,
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: next
... holiday and as my plan, I will be here next next month. I am writing with regard to appl...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...month. I am writing with regard to apply for the job which you advertised recent...
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Suggestion:
...am writing with regard to apply for the job which you advertised recently in the...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... recently in the Australian magazine. I have been working in kindergaten school...
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Line 5, column 60, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... in kindergaten school for last year as a assistant teacher in a part time job. ...
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Suggestion:
...ool for last year as a assistant teacher in a part time job. I had experiences in...
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Line 5, column 86, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
... last year as a assistant teacher in a part time job. I had experiences in looking after...
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... assistant teacher in a part time job. I had experiences in looking after childr...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...n I lived with my sister's family. I love children. I hope I can get educati...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... sister's family. I love children. I hope I can get education degree in Aus...
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Suggestion:
...ldren. I hope I can get education degree in Australia next few years. I am very k...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...on degree in Australia next few years. I am very keen to have a kind of this job...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...day visa for one year. During this time, I am planning spend a haft of year to ta...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... you soon. Yours faithfully Celina,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, well, kind of, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 947.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.36405529954 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57963278365 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585253456221 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 299.7 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.13402061856 197% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.198106997 44.8134815571 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 55.7058823529 76.5299724578 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.7647058824 16.8248392259 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.05882352941 4.34317383033 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 2.54639175258 550% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182928952888 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588465068972 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494381517113 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121441834064 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0109413227282 0.0580467560999 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.5 8.37731958763 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.12 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.