Money is an important aspect of modern era. It is said that "Money can buy anything of your wish". Nowadays, show off is everything; one cannot deny this term. Financial strong sections are given more priority than the weaker sections in present day's society. Hence, I strongly agree with fat salary over job satisfaction.
Apparently, a service holder has to work for approximately eight hours a day, that too mostly for 5 days per week which indicates that an individual in general can spend more time with kith and kin. For instance, a person is working through out week; it makes them working for about 40 hours. So, when start comparing, one can clearly observe that it is about one forth of a whole week time which we work. On the other hand, huge earning is made consequently enables one to perform activities which can also be satisfying.
An unhappy family can also be more distressful than job satisfaction. To illustrate, if one is unable to afford child education or essential stuffs to be done just because a person is fulfilling their personal pleasure; then it might result in harsher. Therefore, it is needless to say that family contentment cannot be taken as granted.
In this showoff world, it becomes very crucial to be protected financial; not only for showoff but also to fulfill each and every essential house hold needs like groceries, medical expenses and educational fee. Hence, taking everything into consideration; I believe highly paid jobs are more significant than self pleasing posts.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 257, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
...ity than the weaker sections in present days society. Hence, I strongly agree with f...
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Line 3, column 234, Rule ID: THROUGH_OUT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'throughout'?
Suggestion: throughout
... kin. For instance, a person is working through out week; it makes them working for about 4...
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Line 3, column 509, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ne to perform activities which can also be satisfying. An unhappy family can also be more ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, consequently, hence, if, so, then, therefore, as to, for instance, in general, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1281.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02352941176 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77937700985 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.682352941176 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.508469682 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2142857143 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0953072096719 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0381041726783 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521228812539 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0622130962632 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381645452148 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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