You have recently moved to a new apartment Write a letter to your friend and explain why did you move Describe the new apartment Invite him her to visit

Dear Sara,

How are you doing these days? It's been quite long since we met, till I remember we united two month prior. Yet, I have a surprise for you that we have owned a new house in royal orchid apartment near Avenue road last month and we have organised a small gathering of loved once in which you are cordially welcomed.

However, our new house is enormous as well as vast, and has got airy balconies with a splendid view of greenery around it. It has got four bedroom and a kitchen with attached bathrooms in each room, with full furnished, plus a spacious dining hall with a wonderful interior. Moreover, we choose this location because our office and children's school was faraway due to which kids were facing inconvenience to arriving at their academy on time. Besides, we were also had issues reaching on time at our company.

Above all, we are throwing a party on coming Saturday night in regards of a our latest flat which we have bought and you and your family must have to join us, this time you shouldn't give any excuses.

Looking forward to seeing you soon. Give my regards to your parents.

Lots of love,
Lovely

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sara, How are you doing these days? Its bee...
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Line 3, column 98, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'months'.
Suggestion: months
...e we met, till I remember we united two month prior. Yet, I have a surprise for you t...
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Line 3, column 250, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... road last month and we have organised a small gathering of loved once in which y...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n which you are cordially welcomed. However, our new house is enormous as w...
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Line 5, column 26, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... welcomed. However, our new house is enormous as well as vast, and has got...
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Line 7, column 61, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...rowing a party on coming Saturday night in regards of a our latest flat which we have bought ...
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Line 7, column 75, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... on coming Saturday night in regards of a our latest flat which we have bought an...
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Line 7, column 75, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'a' or 'our'?
Suggestion: a; our
... on coming Saturday night in regards of a our latest flat which we have bought and yo...
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Line 7, column 174, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: shouldn't
...ily must have to join us, this time you shouldnt give any excuses. Looking forward t...
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Line 11, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...gards to your parents. Lots of love, Lovely
^^^
Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...arents. Lots of love, Lovely
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, look, moreover, so, well, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 951.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63902439024 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27948458434 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.682926829268 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.3048307329 44.8134815571 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4545454545 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6363636364 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45454545455 4.34317383033 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152726591296 0.216113520407 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0529899490354 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628714403979 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101611459953 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541679911631 0.0580467560999 93% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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