Write a letter to the publisher in a newspaper, asking to advertise a meeting of people from different countries you are organizing. Explain where, when and why.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to request you to print an advertisement in your daily newspaper about the planned conference of industrialists.
I am Prathap Reddy, working as an event organiser. I am going to conduct a gathering of sucessful industralists at City Center auditorium. This meeting is to share knowledge about latest inventions on wide range of concepts. At the end of the seminar there is a planned interaction with local students who are pursuing graduation and post-graduation.
This event is scheduled for two days i.e., 9-12-2014 to 10-12-2014. The interaction with studen...
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Sentence: I am Prathap Reddy, working as an event organiser.
Error: organiser Suggestion: organizer
Sentence: I am going to conduct a gathering of sucessful industralists at City Center auditorium.
Error: industralists Suggestion: industrialists
Error: sucessful Suggestion: successful
Sentence: This is really a great oppurtunity to the youngsters to have an interaction with highly talented business professionals.
Error: oppurtunity Suggestion: opportunity
Sentence: I would be greatful if you could print this ad on one day before the conference i.e., on 8-12-2014.
Error: greatful Suggestion: grateful
Sentence: Look forward to see an impressive and attactive advertisement on your paper.
Error: attactive Suggestion: attractive
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Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 6 2
No. of Sentences: 14 10
No. of Words: 217 200
No. of Characters: 1031 1000
No. of Different Words: 130 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.838 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.751 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.187 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 67 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 58 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 44 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 35 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.5 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.652 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.286 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.311 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.688 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.084 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 4