Some young people are leaving the countryside to live in cities or towns, only old people live in the countryside? What are the problems of this issue? What can be done to solve this problem?
In modern society, urbanization has become a trend in the world. Younger people want to relocate from the countryside to the city, leaving elderly people there. In my own perspective, it would lead to problems, yet we have solutions to tackle the issue.
First of all, immigration of the young from countryside to city would result in the lack of labor there. Even if the majority of industry and business are located in the city, there are still some of them far away from there which requires young labor, such as agriculture and waste disposal. The short of energetic labor could cause problematic operations of those industries.
Second of all, if the younger family members move out from the urban area for better employment opportunities and leave the older ones at home, there would be nobody that could look after them when they are sick. In addition, the technologies and equipment of the hospitals in the rural area are generally not as advanced as those in the city. Apart from that, elderly people who stay in the countryside are easier to feel lonely and depressed, because they have not many people around to talk and share thoughts.
In order to resolve the problem, government could announce certain policies to keep the young residents outside the city. For instance, they could encourage companies to move out of the central business area by lowering their tax revenue. Therefore, youngsters could earn more opportunities of jobs in the countryside. Additionally, cities could provide better benefits to the older citizens, such as medical insurance and transportation, thus the younger citizens would be more willing to bring their older families to the city and live together.
To conclude, relocation of the young from countryside to city might generate problems for the old staying at home, whereas there are effective methods that could solve the problem.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, second, so, still, therefore, thus, whereas, apart from, for instance, in addition, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1581.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70141790341 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554838709677 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8309021388 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.928571429 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198850008452 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627430844485 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.07288756342 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118006800829 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531461571338 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.