A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
It is known that people around the world feel that they are not fully prepared when it comes to college. Although, it may be different for others, and that all depends on how much preparation each student receives during their high school years. The prompt comes from the perspective that all students should study the same national curriculum until they enter college. In my opinion, I strongly agree with this recommendation and argue that not all students are prepared for college for three reasons.
To begin, not all students have motivation to the same degree because of the type of teaching styles they come across. For example, not all teachers are passionate at what they do. Some are unwilling to go above and beyond in assisting students to their needs. Many students learn at a slower pace than others, and it's difficult to keep up when the teacher is not accommodating to every student. Sometimes, when students ask questions in class, teachers would respond in a way where it'll make the student feel guilty for asking a specific question. It gets uncomfortable for the student because when that happens, they're afraid of approaching the teacher further. It's crucial for a nation to require the same national curriculum that way all teachers are instructing the same concepts and all students are on the same pace.
Further, many public schools do not have enough funding compared to private schools. For instance, private schools offer a more variety of unique classes such as lab work that could be done at a university, film-making and more hands-on courses. This helps students gain more knowledge in other fields along with grasping ideas of what they're getting themselves into for college-leveled courses. Copious public schools to not offer relevant classes simply because they don't have enough funding; public schools are free to attend whereas it costs thousands of dollars to attend a private high school. It's unfair to families who aren't able to send their children to more developed schools. With having the same national curriculum, students from public schools would be able to experience the same degree of learning as students from private schools.
Finally, there are many aspects that students should be aware of before attending college. As a entering college student, people ruminate on the decision of their college major. It's a difficult choice to make because a lot of students are not aware of what's out there; they don't learn about all the possibilities in high school. This is why it's crucial to show high school students at least most of the majors they could encounter. It would be beneficial to present what is required to have a certain job in a related field.
Of course, one would argue that some students are indifferent about school and aren't looking into further higher education after high school. However, if the same national curriculum is implemented with the same level of teaching qualities, it would help open up students' mind throughout their high school career. With that support, students can change their mind and end up having the covet to continue their education. Otherwise, without the same curriculum, it would be easier for students to not follow along. In order for students to be prepared for college, the same national curriculum would be beneficial to their learning and motivation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, look, may, so, whereas, at least, for example, for instance, of course, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 33.0505617978 136% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 81.0 58.6224719101 138% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2809.0 2235.4752809 126% => OK
No of words: 555.0 442.535393258 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06126126126 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.85370353223 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57689533718 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 215.323595506 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.455855855856 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 848.7 704.065955056 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 6.24550561798 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3633198455 60.3974514979 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 104.037037037 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5555555556 23.4991977007 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2962962963 5.21951772744 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261384387214 0.243740707755 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0890230839604 0.0831039109588 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793364245344 0.0758088955206 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172645785024 0.150359130593 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057343063725 0.0667264976115 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 14.1392134831 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 100.480337079 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.