Your car insurance company has told you that they are going to increase the insurance amount you have to pay for your car each month You are not happy about this Write a letter to the insurance company In your letter explain why you are writing to them wh

Dear sir/madam,

I am writing this letter in response to your mail, which I have received 2 days ago from your insurance company regarding rise in the insurance amount.

However, I know that market prices are hiking day by day and your agency also need to do increment in your charges. Since, I remember about more than 25 years our family is engaged in your organisation. As we have old bond with your institutions. Adding more, now you are increasing about 40% of in the insurance fare.

As, I have never had a car accident as well as have not claim for my insurance any time but this much growth in the pay is really high plus I am afraid that I might have to connect with another association, who are offering good in just less amount because I can not pay such a huge amount every month.

Please if possible then, talk to the other committee members and do needful if possible. Thanks for your time and consideration.

Thanking you,
Yours faithfully,
Lily

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Dear sir/madam, I am writing this letter in response to...
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...o need to do increment in your charges. Since, I remember about more than 25 years ou...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...family is engaged in your organisation. As we have old bond with your institutions...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ons. Adding more, now you are increasing about 40% of in the insurance fare. ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...re, now you are increasing about 40% of in the insurance fare. As, I have n...
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Line 7, column 58, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'claimed'.
Suggestion: claimed
... had a car accident as well as have not claim for my insurance any time but this much...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...pay such a huge amount every month. Please if possible then, talk to the oth...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ime and consideration. Thanking you, Yours faithfully, Lily
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n. Thanking you, Yours faithfully, Lily
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, really, regarding, so, then, well, as well as, i am afraid

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 812.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66666666667 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56579428323 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.695402298851 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.9153873531 44.8134815571 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2222222222 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.11111111111 4.34317383033 210% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.42193551904 0.216113520407 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151649648651 0.0766984524023 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0955532932911 0.0603063233224 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205466089529 0.12726935374 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107990530782 0.0580467560999 186% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.