Technology is flourishing by leaps and bounds in this contemporary world, One major milestone of advancing technology is the online banking system through which people can access their financial accounts and perform fund transfers. Every advancement in technology has its own boon and banes, therefore here I would like to account few advantages and drawbacks of this change in humanity.
To embark on, Online Banking has made people's life effortless when it comes to money transaction and online shopping, therefore to cope up with their fast paced lifestyle, folks tend to save most of their private information online which makes their transactions and purchases convenient, For instance, If a person irrespective of his location wants to make a money transaction or a purchase he can make his payment from any unknown device available to him just by logging in and paying a company or his beneficiary as his banking contacts and account details are in handy. Furthermore, people also save personal data online in the form of drives or in any online portal using cloud backup, this has made the public's personal memories ever lasting because even if their personal media is erased by their personal devices, it can be re-accessible from the online server portals.
On the Flip side, The world wide web is universally attainable this lead to the rise of online fraudsters who master online hacking and hence become professional bounty hunters. Rich people and big companies have a very encrypted and secure banking portals therefore the middle class multitude becomes their primary target to easily hack small but myriad funds in the bank accounts of the working class people. In addition to the availability of private information even the personal data of plain folks is easily available to any person who can hack or hire a hacker, this can lead to misuse of personal data in many unethical manners like blackmailing and tampering the personal data for abuse.
To re captivate, Storing personal and private information online has made peoples lives convenient but irresponsibly storing confidential data can lead to massive mistreatment, In my notion this trend is positive, provided people should learn and imply safety measures to keep their personal and private data secure.
- In some countries few people earn extremely high salaries Some people think that this is good for a country while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn Discuss both views and give your opinion 73
- One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing Do you think advantages of this outweigh disadvantages 78
- Some people think that to be successful you need to get in university education whereas others say it is not true Discuss both ideas and give your own opinion 85
- Some people think that school should reward students who show the best academic results while others believe that it is more important to reward students who show improvements Discuss both views and give your own opinion 89
- The food travels thousands of miles from farm to consumer Some people think it would be better to our environment and economy if people only ate local produced food What extent do the advantages outweigh disadvantages 77
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, so, therefore, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1917.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 369.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19512195122 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76945942009 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558265582656 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 621.9 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 46.0 20.2975951904 227% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 121.711749638 49.4020404114 246% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 239.625 106.682146367 225% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 46.125 20.7667163134 222% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.375 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27568347282 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118450276554 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0791340818537 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175258727923 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0804406222047 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.1 13.0946893788 199% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 16.33 50.2224549098 33% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.4 11.3001002004 198% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.77 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.45 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.4 10.1190380762 202% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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