You should spend about 20 minutes on this task You have just received a credit card statement from your bank The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make Write a letter to the bank manager In the letter Introduce

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to bring to your attention that there are expensive purchases made from my credit card last month which I never did.

My name is Shwatank Bhasin, and I am a customer of HDC bank at MG road. I have been using the credit card of your bank for the past five years which initially was issued by my company. I am using the credit card for paying the fuel prices only.

To my surprise, my last credit card statement included the list of items that I never purchased, and neither I received a notification on the phone. Those items included a laptop, Samsung mobile, Samsung digital watch, and earphones. I have bought these items last year, but not last month.

I would request you to please investigate my case because I think I have been scammed by someone who has used my credit card while buying the above items. I have enclosed the current statement of my credit card for your reference. I will be grateful to you if you will expedite and resolve my case since I have to make payments for my current credit card statement.

I am looking forward to hearing a positive and prompt response from your end.

Yours sincerely,
Shwatank Bhasin

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 156, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...edit card while buying the above items. I have enclosed the current statement of ...
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Line 9, column 232, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...t of my credit card for your reference. I will be grateful to you if you will exp...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...or my current credit card statement. I am looking forward to hearing a positiv...
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, while, i think

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 978.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59154929577 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39821103434 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56338028169 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 303.3 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4546213539 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27100911987 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0958508031767 0.0766984524023 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725874350921 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137122447212 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0765965974275 0.0580467560999 132% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.