The passage and lecture both disccus migration of edmontosaur in winter from arctic slope to south. The writer claims three arguments to support this migration. The lecturer in the other hand casts doubt on claim made in article. She mentions migration of edmontosaur is inconvenience.
First, the author states, edmontosaur migrate to seek for diet. In cold winter noplants growing. Therefore the edmontosaur left to temporate zone. This statement is refuted by professor. She mentions, cliamte before one hundred million years ago was warmer than today. Sunshine 24 hours. so plants can grow in high rate. hence there is no reason for migration.
Second, the author elaborates on presence of many fossils in same place. This mean that edmonotsaurs lived in herd. living in herd support migration. The lecturer in the other hand contradicts this argument. She claims, living nin herd dosenot mean that edmonotsaurs can migrate, because there are many reasons to live in herd rather than migration. For example, rossefeld arck live to gether for extra protection from predators. These animals do not migrate.
Finally, the passage says, edmonotosaurs capable of migration long distance because, they can run fast. This point is challenged by professor. She contents, adult edmonotosaurs can travel long distance, but juvinals can not run or move fast, especialy in slope. Furthermore adult edmonotsaurs can not leave young ones behind. therefore, they should live to gather in same place without migration.
The passage and lecture both disccus migration of edmontosaur in winter from arctic slope to south. The writer claims three arguments to support this migration. The lecturer in the other hand casts doubt on claim made in article. She mentions migration of edmontosaur is inconvenience.
First, the author states, edmontosaur migrate to seek for diet. In cold winter noplants growing. Therefore the edmontosaur left to temprate zone. This statement is refuted by professor. She mentions, cliamte before one hundred million years ago was warmer than today. Sunshine 24 hours. so plants can grow in high rate. hence there is no reason for migration.
Second, the author elaborates on presence of many fossils in same place. This mean that edmonotsaurs lived in herd. living in herd support migration. The lecturer in the other hand contradicts this argument. She claims, living nin herd dosenot mean that edmonotsaurs can migrate, because there are many reasons to live in herd rather than migration. For example, rossefeld arck live to gether for extra protection from predetors. These animals do not migrate.
Finally, the passage says, edmonotosaurs capable of migration long distance because, they can run fast. This point is challenged by professor. She contents, adult edmonotosaurs can travel long distance, but juvinals can not run or move fast, especialy in slope. Furthermore adult edmonotsaurs can not leave young ones behind. therefore, they should live to gather in same place without migration.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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The passage and lecture both disccus mig...
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...ee arguments to support this migration. The lecturer in the other hand casts doubt ...
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...detors. These animals do not migrate. Finally, the passage says, edmonotosaurs...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, hence, second, so, therefore, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.4613686534 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 12.0772626932 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 22.412803532 62% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 30.3222958057 106% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 5.01324503311 299% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1273.0 1373.03311258 93% => OK
No of words: 236.0 270.72406181 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39406779661 5.08290768461 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75783012077 2.5805825403 107% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 145.348785872 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631355932203 0.540411800872 117% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 419.366225166 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 3.25607064018 307% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 13.0662251656 184% => OK
Sentence length: 9.0 21.2450331126 42% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.7556892319 49.2860985944 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 53.0416666667 110.228320801 48% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 9.83333333333 21.698381199 45% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.125 7.06452816374 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 4.19205298013 262% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.27373068433 304% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361926537132 0.272083759551 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0986909475069 0.0996497079465 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.144482744499 0.0662205650399 218% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.279914869929 0.162205337803 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.334137370304 0.0443174109184 754% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.3589403974 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.34 53.8541721854 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.0289183223 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.5 12.2367328918 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.42419426049 97% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 63.6247240618 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 3.5 10.7273730684 33% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 5.6 10.498013245 53% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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