Nutritional issues are one of the most debated topics that our society is facing nowadays. The main concerns are whereas it would be better to introduce all the nutritional factors by following a standard diet, or if it would be healthier to eat specific foods avoiding others. In my opinion, a complete and healthy diet should not be possible without eating all the components deriving from the whole variety of foods that we can find in nature, fish and meat included. In addition, the intensive plantation of the alternative foods and the related economic aspects can be as dangerous and obscure f...
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