The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the number of goods transported namely road, water, rail,
pipeline from 1974 to 2002 in the UK.
Overall, it is evident from the graph that road had experienced the most spectacular by
the end of the period. The amount of goods transported by all four modes of transport
witnessed an upward trend over the time frame.
In comparison with the amount of road in the UK, which accounted for 70 million
tons of good delivered, the quantity in rail and water were much lower and nearly equal,
at 38 millions of tons. At the same time, the number of pipeline just at 5 millions of tons.
The year 2002 saw a rapid climb in the quantity of good transported by road about 88
millions of tons. Despite some fluctuations in first four years, the number of water and
rail saw different trends. While the figure for water witnessed an upward trend to 60
millions of tons, that of water decreased slowly then recovering to the first time. The
number of pipeline had similar to road, there was a dramatic growth to 23 millions of
tons, followed by a slight decrease to 20 millions of tons at the end of the period.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 4, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: comparison,
...n upward trend over the time frame. In comparison with the amount of road in the UK, whic...
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Line 8, column 4, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '38 million'.
Suggestion: 38 million
...r were much lower and nearly equal, at 38 millions of tons. At the same time, the number of p...
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Line 8, column 74, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '5 million'.
Suggestion: 5 million
...me time, the number of pipeline just at 5 millions of tons. The year 2002 saw a rapid climb ...
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Line 9, column 83, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '88 million'.
Suggestion: 88 million
...ntity of good transported by road about 88 millions of tons. Despite some fluctuations in firs...
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Line 11, column 84, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '60 million'.
Suggestion: 60 million
... for water witnessed an upward trend to 60 millions of tons, that of water decreased slowly th...
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Line 13, column 72, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '23 million'.
Suggestion: 23 million
...to road, there was a dramatic growth to 23 millions of tons, followed by a slight decrease to...
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Line 14, column 40, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '20 million'.
Suggestion: 20 million
... tons, followed by a slight decrease to 20 millions of tons at the end of the period.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 946.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61463414634 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45666789222 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512195121951 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 272.7 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3762980286 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.111111111 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7777777778 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.88888888889 5.23603664747 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 14.0 3.83414634146 365% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169653749156 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.08508844492 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0849317617594 0.0843802449381 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0702781376344 0.15604864568 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0825915533524 0.0819641961636 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.