A builder worked in your house a few weeks ago. You did not like the result of his work. Write a letter to him and say
- Describe the work you wanted him to do.
- What is your complaint about his job?
- What do you expect him to do about it?
Dear Sir,
I am writing you now to complain about the service that is being offered from your company’s builder. As per my quotation to your reputed company, I had requested to completely renovate my kitchen by replacing the old drawers, window, gas stoves, kitchen water tap and painting on the walls.
Unfortunately, the drawer your company replaced was of egregious quality and one of the drawers is already came out and fell on the floor yesterday. Moreover, gas stove installed is of some local brand, however, while charging the bill you had charged the amount of the superior brand. Appa...
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to send some worker to fix the issues
to send some workers to fix the issues
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 9 10
No. of Words: 195 200
No. of Characters: 904 1000
No. of Different Words: 121 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.737 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.636 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.43 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 61 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 47 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 24 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 15 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.667 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 13.047 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.333 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.384 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.745 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.133 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 4