It is generally considered that nowadays it is crucial to gain the distinction between good and bad at their starting ages, Punishment is the best path to help them in this things. I largely disagree with this said notion due to they will get more irritate and ill-mannered.
To commence with, when they get punish by their parents and society they will get irritate. To explain it, they become irritate and they can not doing their own works properly. All day they will sit alone in one corner. in addition, they will angry on each person. For instance, a survey was conducted by the Saint Children organization found in 2016 that those children become irritate in their whole life. Hence, they are destroy their own life with their irritation manner.
Further strengthening the view, most vital they will get disrespectful. To elaborate it, they know their parents very well and they known that they are punish by their elders but only for some time. so, they speak to their parents very rude way and disrespect all their senors. To epitome, a headline was published by "THE MOSCOW TIMES" newspaper revealed that 80% kids become rude and disrespect of their mature because they are getting punish by their teachers. Thus, they can not fulfill happiness in their life of their rudeness.
To conclude, I strongly believe that punishment is not good to toddlers because they ruin and spoil their life because their wrong attitude and rudeness.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...shment is the best path to help them in this things. I largely disagree with this sa...
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'do'
Suggestion: do
..., they become irritate and they can not doing their own works properly. All day they ...
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Suggestion: In
... day they will sit alone in one corner. in addition, they will angry on each perso...
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Suggestion: destroyed
...te in their whole life. Hence, they are destroy their own life with their irritation ma...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Further,
...n life with their irritation manner. Further strengthening the view, most vital they...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'punished'.
Suggestion: punished
... very well and they known that they are punish by their elders but only for some time....
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Suggestion: So
...by their elders but only for some time. so, they speak to their parents very rude ...
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Suggestion:
...disrespect all their senors. To epitome, a headline was published by 'THE MO...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, then, thus, well, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1217.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96734693878 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49437517999 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559183673469 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.0282698307 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.9285714286 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104244939712 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0460229967929 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503604757944 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0916832925827 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669756040196 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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