Last year you met someone on holiday and became friends He she has informed you that they will be travelling near to your home town on business in a few months time Write a letter to your friend inviting them to stay with you In your letter say how please

Dear Sakshi,

Hope you are doing well by the grace of Almighty. I still remember the lovely time that I had spend with you in Maldives last year, and how we become friends. I know its been a year, and we haven't seen each other due to our busy work schedule.

Surprisingly, I receive a letter from you, and I felt happy and pleased to hear that you'll be coming to my hometown for a business tour. I understand that we both were missing each other since our last meetup in Maldives. Luckily, we get another opportunity to see each other in the next few months as stated in your yesterday's letter.

As you are coming to my hometown for work, you are invited to stay at my house during you entire business trip. Please do not feel shy and uncomfortable with my warm welcoming to stay at my home. Besides, you are working ABC company building, which is nearest to my society and it will take ten minutes of walk to reach to the office. Not only you'll be saving your expenses but also we both will get a chance to spend a quality time together.

Moreover, I will plan some of the special evening and weekends to go out for dinning and to see some of the beautiful destinations in my city such as palaces and museums. I'm hoping that you'll be glad to accept my warm welcome to my house during your business trip to my hometown.

Looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Regards,
Shwatank

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Average: 8.4 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 95, Rule ID: HAD_VBP[1]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: spent
...ill remember the lovely time that I had spend with you in Maldives last year, and how...
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Line 3, column 95, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: spent
...ill remember the lovely time that I had spend with you in Maldives last year, and how...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 191, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...friends. I know its been a year, and we havent seen each other due to our busy work sc...
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Line 5, column 86, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
...d I felt happy and pleased to hear that youll be coming to my hometown for a business...
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Line 7, column 346, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
... walk to reach to the office. Not only youll be saving your expenses but also we bot...
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Line 9, column 23, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...time together. Moreover, I will plan some of the special evening and weekends to go out ...
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Line 9, column 97, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ekends to go out for dinning and to see some of the beautiful destinations in my city such ...
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Line 9, column 172, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...in my city such as palaces and museums. Im hoping that youll be glad to accept my ...
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Line 9, column 187, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
... as palaces and museums. Im hoping that youll be glad to accept my warm welcome to my...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, look, moreover, so, still, well, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1145.0 937.175257732 122% => OK
No of words: 259.0 206.0 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42084942085 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36746606607 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 127.690721649 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583011583012 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 354.6 290.88556701 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.037038877 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0769230769 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9230769231 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92307692308 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269200135015 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0900653762308 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589536741514 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145550512724 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593639125554 0.0580467560999 102% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.36 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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