Write a letter to your manager to request setting up a cafeteria for the staff.
In your letter, you should say:
-the problem is due to lack of cafeteria
-how you and your colleagues feel about it
-what suggestions do you have.
Dear Mr. Salvatore,
I am writing this letter to request for installing a new space of cafeteria for our employees in our building on the top floor as we have limited seats available on the current one.
Let me briefly explain the problem. As you know, the number of employees has been increased in our firm. The workers are unable to find the spaces to relax in their break time, especially when it's lunchtime. When employees come to the cafeteria, they have to wait in queue for their number to sit and have their meals.
It is annoying to wait in a queue as I and my other colleagues have experienced the same. Due to this, we are not properly occupying the free time given to us during our working hours, and quickly finishing the food which is causing digesting problems to our diet.
We have a bigger space available on the top floor of our building which can be fully occupied to its potential use by installing a new breakout space. I have attached some of the new designs which you may like for the new cafeteria.
I am hoping to hear the response for the current problem which could be solved as per my suggestion.
Yours faithfully,
Shwatank Bhasin
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 168, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, may, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 969.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59241706161 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51115970172 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578199052133 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 289.8 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1523409383 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0909090909 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1818181818 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.36363636364 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191876747812 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0718268276517 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517025164551 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0900796779268 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381757821312 0.0580467560999 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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