An English-speaking friend wants to spend a two-week holiday in your region and has written asking for information and advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
offer to find somewhere to stay
give advice about what to do
give information about what clothes to bring
.
Dear john,
Your recent letter written to me brought a huge pleasure to me. I am very delighted to know about your arrival to my city during your holidays. Spending time with you for two weeks is going to be fascinating for both of us.
As far as my suggestions to help you out in my city are concerned, a prominent hotel City Heart having best accommodation and warm hospitality services could be suitable for you stay in. Beside this, amusement park and shops are located where you can enjoy a lot. I would like to remind you that on the day of your arrival, I might be attending educational seminar organised by my college. Therefore, after reaching to the city, you will have to hire a taxi to reach the hotel. But in evening, I would like meet you eagerly as soon as possible. And you should bring your summer clothes with you as the summer season is on its full swing. I am very excited to show you the most prevalent museum, historic building, and canals of my city. You will be very happy to know that I am planning to prepare traditional cuisines for you.
My excitement to meet you is on cloud nine. Do not forget to bring my photographs that we captured during the last trip.
Best regard,
Jasvinder
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Comments
Any other problem ??
Any other problem ??
Don't always use 'You, I' as
Don't always use 'You, I' as the subject of a sentence.
amusement park and shops are located where you can enjoy a lot.
Description: can you re-write this sentence?
flaws:
The topic didn't ask you see each other.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 16 10
No. of Words: 224 200
No. of Characters: 960 1000
No. of Different Words: 137 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.869 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.286 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.44 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 56 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 41 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 29 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 17 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.842 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.125 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.325 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.624 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.211 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 4