The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

Essay topics:

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below illustrates the huge number of tourists attending a particular Caribbean island and where they want to live: ship or island in the period from 2010 to 2017.

Overall, it's clear that the island welcomed visitors over the period shown. staying on islands is more prevalent than staying on cruise ships between 2010 and 2015. However, in the last two years, the figures have been reserved.

Looking at the graph more closely, one can be see that initially, a total of 1 million tourists visited the isalnd. An upward trend was seen over the period to reach 3.5 million in 2017, except for a slight shift in the number of people taking part in ships from 2015 to 2017.

As for accommodations, in 2010, three-quarters of total tourists stayed on islands; the remainder stayed on cruise ships. During the first five consecutive years, tourists preferred staying on the islands to staying on cruise ships. To be more specific, the former reached a high of 1.5 million in 2013 and then stabilized over the next two years, while the latter, after some fluctuation, continued to rise to around 1.25 million in 2015. in the last 2 years: 2016 and 2017, staying on cruise ships outnumbered staying on islands, with its figures reaching respectively 2 and 1.5 million.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'graphs'.
Suggestion: graphs
The line graph below illustrates the huge number of to...
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Suggestion:
...and in the period from 2010 to 2017. Overall, its clear that the island welco...
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Suggestion: Staying
...elcomed visitors over the period shown. staying on islands is more prevalent than stayi...
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Suggestion: In
...to rise to around 1.25 million in 2015. in the last 2 years: 2016 and 2017, stayin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, so, then, while, as for, except for

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1071.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 219.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8904109589 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55772985811 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561643835616 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7040043932 43.030603864 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.1 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1 5.23603664747 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181130393195 0.215688989381 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0776207012365 0.103423049105 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0904681894851 0.0843802449381 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144725083043 0.15604864568 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10972623466 0.0819641961636 134% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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