Write a thank you note to your closest friend.
Hi Ann,
I am writing this letter to express my appreciation.
When I was having everything new experiences, you helped me out. I was new to the country (Korea) and new jobs (teaching) and you proposed an opportunity as a teacher, to me.
Even though, I had some difficulties of dealing and controlling the kids because of no previous teaching experiences, you helped me out every time.
You had also worried about my feelings like a family. Especially, the time when you gave me the plaster because I fall down from the stairs, I was very touched. Also when I had a sore throat, you were told me to be careful as you passed me by. At that time, I could feel that you were actually worried about me.
I appreciate everything for what you have done for me.
Now I gathered teaching experience for over a year with your support, I feel that I have to thank you for all your assistance.
Even though I have to leave this place for all the reasons as you have mentioned, I will always remember you and always feel thank you for the greatest experiences gave me.
Best of luck,
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When I was having everything new experiences, you helped me out.
When I was having everything with new experiences, you helped me out.
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