Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
As modern society increasingly develops, there are plenty of different jobs are created to fit people's needs and a heated debate has arisen among people about which type of job can satisfy employees most. Personally, I believe workers get more satisfaction from various kinds of tasks. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following assay.
To begin with, while similar tasks bring about boredom, varied working affairs gives worker the sense of freshness. Naturally, it's difficult for people to be fully engaged in something for a long time, but when they get differentiated things to do, workers may feel recharged and again immerse themselves in work. The feeling of freshness could in turn become glad and make people more energetic to embrace coming tasks. My aunt's personal experience is a compelling illustration of this. Before she get the job she is doing recently, she was working in a jewelry design company. The company has a fixed pattern of design and almost everytime my aunt received a new order, she could easily follow the past style under the group leader's guidance and achieved it in a short time. However, my aunt really felt frustrated and boring, conviced of losing the spirit of design. Finally, she was fed up with that and went to her current company.
Secondly, always concentrating on one thing can make people become expertised in it, while doing different tasks requires more comprehensive competence. Through the process of coping with various problems, employees are more likely to fetch the sense of improvement and achivement, which they can hardly feel when repeating the same job every day. For instance, my friend's father is working in a laboratory and responsible in incubating cells. His group have recieved many different kinds of demand of cells and my friend's father really enjoys his job. Differerent cells are accustomed to specified environment and requires varied types of care. Through the accumulation of knowledge, he now is familiar with culturing many kinds of cells and is quite willing to give instruction to his students. My friend's father feels really satisfied with the opportunity to get involved in new challenges.
In conclusion, based on the arguments explored above, I am of the opinion that emplyees are more satisfied to receive different types of tasks to finish. This is because worker can feel freshed, and improve themselves more comprehensively
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 500, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gets'.
Suggestion: gets
...elling illustration of this. Before she get the job she is doing recently, she was ...
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Line 3, column 728, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'leaders'' or 'leader's'?
Suggestion: leaders'; leader's
...y follow the past style under the group leaders guidance and achieved it in a short tim...
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Line 5, column 469, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...cubating cells. His group have recieved many different kinds of demand of cells and my friends...
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Line 5, column 625, Rule ID: NEEDS_FIXED[1]
Message: "requires varied" is only accepted in certain dialects. For something more widely acceptable, try 'variing' or 'to be varied'.
Suggestion: variing; to be varied
...d to specified environment and requires varied types of care. Through the accumulation...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2049.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 399.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13533834586 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76570021542 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573934837093 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 639.0 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8280481801 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.45 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.95 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.95 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20411333466 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535101147627 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456652719539 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120413755436 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337960383837 0.0645574589148 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 86.8835125448 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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