Dear Eric,
I hope this letter see you well. I am writing to tell you that I just changed my job. You may not believe it that I am working in Sydney, Australia now. I quited my last job in A company on 8 October 2016. The reason that I decided to change my job is the complex interpersonal relationship that I cannot handle in A company. Any way, I am glad I made that decision and managed to find a new job in Sydney.
The company I work for is called D&C. I still work in my profession as a civil engineer. My main duty includes supervising construction activities and compiling documents, which is easy for me because I do not need to deal with complicate interpersonal relationship with colleagues any more.
I would like to invite you to Sydney for a travel. I live not far from the Bondi Beach. We can swim and enjoy barbeque. I sincerely hope you can come for a visit. I am look forward to a positive reply.
Yours friendly,
Jim Pan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 42, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'travel'.
Suggestion: travel
... would like to invite you to Sydney for a travel. I live not far from the Bondi Beach. W...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, may, so, still, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 777.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.34078212291 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74585410036 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620111731844 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.6755716111 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 51.8 76.5299724578 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.9333333333 16.8248392259 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.73333333333 4.34317383033 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136749648246 0.216113520407 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0450639346723 0.0766984524023 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523467497865 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0618066035092 0.12726935374 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661464722727 0.0580467560999 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.0 8.37731958763 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 70.7449484536 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.0 8.71597938144 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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