These days, more and more people are going to other countries for significant periods of time,
either to find job or to study. There are clear many benefits to doing this, but people who live
abroad can also face some difficulties. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living
and working in a foreign countries.
In recent years, moving abroad for education and occupation has becoming the mutual trend of the number of workers, especially the young adults. Although people have to deal with difficulties when deciding living oversea, the benefits it brings afterwards seem to outweigh the drawbacks in long term progress.
On the one hand, heading oversea challenge workers and students in term of opportunity cost. FIrst, in order to survive oversea, people have to pay exorbitant living expenses. For example, exchange students to English-speaking countries has to afford for food, accommodation and tuition during the time they study, which costs them more money than studying in their own nations. Second, when it comes to culture shocks, people have to experience disgust feelings such as frustration and homesickness during the early stage of moving abroad. If workers can not overcome this process it can,otherwise, leads them to sense of isolation and depression.
On the other hand, spending time working or studying in foreign countries provides people with marketable skills that may help them in further careers. In other words, if workers have already immersed themselves in international environment, they are more likely to thoroughly understand different cultures. This helps open the doors for them to brighter employment prospects, which later will make up total cost spending before. Moreover, living abroad motivate people to mature so that they can take care of themselves make decisions by their own instead of relying on nepotism.
In conclusion, despite some obstacles from culture shocks and opportunity costs of foreign life, essential individual skills gained through living abroad provides job prospects and interpersonal skills for people who dare to invest for their future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 589, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , otherwise
...ers can not overcome this process it can,otherwise, leads them to sense of isolation and d...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, moreover, second, so, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 13.1623246493 8% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53818181818 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81213427374 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621818181818 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2734558047 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.916666667 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9166666667 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.58333333333 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178271770515 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0576439325048 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553043081377 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0996416651187 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379078817667 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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