Each year, the crime rate increases. What are the causes of crime and what could be done to prevent this rise in criminal activity?
In recent decades, the increase in crime rate has become a great concern for people all around the world due to its negative impacts on citizens’ lives. Although the sources of crime are said to appear from both the government and citizens, people can take step to prevent this trend.
These are numbers of reasons why this pattern exists. First, violent films nowadays can be widely broadcast in social media, especially in television, which leads a majority of children and teenagers to juvenile delinquency. For example, a small child watch violent films daily is more likely to behave in aggressive ways, or even commit crimes at young age. Secondly, since the law is not strict enough for people to adhere to, they otherwise tend to break the law to achieve their desires. For instance, if the government set ten-year imprisonment for stealing in stead of punishing them with social activities, citizens would tend to give up wrong thoughts and start to make end meet by their own abilities.
Nevertheless, some solutions can be taken into effect to minimize the crime rate. First, telecommunication companies should limit the TV viewers for violent films by broadcasting these films at midnight when children are falling asleep. In fact, Vietnam channels currently do not give ways to violent films in the time frame from 8pm to 10pm , which has already minimize the crimes caused by teenagers in some latest years. Secondly, government should increase the time of imprisonments in order to give up would-be offenders. For example, some European countries not only imprisoning citizens for drunk driving but also sentencing to death penalties at the third time already set drunk-driving crime at lower rate.
In conclusion, the increase in crime among countries initiates from reckless behaviors of both the government and citizens. By following these first steps, crime rate is expected to fall with the minimum damages to society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, third, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1633.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18412698413 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75967330445 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5651049275 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.642857143 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15903229915 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606357516445 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439379554406 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107785915892 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309794437833 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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