The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given pie charts present data concerning total expenditure of a school in the UK from 1981 to 2001.
Overall, teaching staff’s salaries accounted for the majority part of aggregate spending during the two-decade period. On the contrary, insurance made up the lowest proportion of all categories.
In 1981, 40% of the school budget were allocated for income of teachers and this percentage rose to 50% the following decade prior to capturing a level of 45% by the end of the course. Besides, ex...
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