Air travel only the richest people . The majority of people get no advantage from development of air travel. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
There is no doubt that due to technology advancement, Air travel and aircraft industry have been improving increasingly in terms of price and transportation day by day. This essay totally disagree this proposition that this kind of travel way only for rich people. Firstly ,This essay will discuss the fact that why air travel important is for us and, secondly, will explain that how low-segment people could travel by using this sort of transportation.
First of all, airline sector can be considered as one of the major industries in all countries which create employment chance for citizens of host country. Besides this, It is true that even though airway tickets start from higher prices especially in holiday periods or intensive months, we know that they run employ a lots kind of workers which includes pilots, hostesses, porters and ground staffs. According to Europe Airlines Agency, in Turkey, for instance , there are only seven airline firm mainly Turkish Airlines, but when we check in their on website regarding profit and productivity for the country , can see that they are producing and employing much more service and personnel in compared to other sectors.
On the other hand, when we think from point of low-segment people , it can be said that today’s flight ticket costs are too cheaper than in the past. It does means that with the increasing number of airline business and competition in the sector is creating appropriate price for passengers and providing short charter-flight to fly to abroad or anywhere. Pegasus Airline, for example, which its policy has been based on for a long time cheap-price and happy client, always provide to their customers low-price ticket that stars from 9.90 USD to 39.99 in all domestic airports throughout Turkey.
In conclusion, it doesn't matter who you are, this sort of travel way seems useful and appropriate both rich and poor people by creating different service model over the recent years.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, no doubt, sort of, first of all, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1650.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14018691589 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68811391297 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647975077882 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.1547969314 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 165.0 106.682146367 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.1 20.7667163134 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 18.0 7.06120827912 255% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16150997503 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0647736185593 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557007711703 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.09962212205 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0729883579911 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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